composition - rock opera: "Angry Father"

I've decided to completely redo the 3rd act of the rock opera because the storyline as it currently sits makes little sense. Decide for yourself:

Original synopsis: (Act 1) Eileen is a fifteen year old girl. She lives with her father – her parents separated 6 years ago. She has a penchant for Guns n Roses and gets into trouble all the time at school. One day she goes too far and gets expelled, so her father decides that she needs morals and values drummed into her. So he sends her to a nunnery in the hope of changing her attitude. (Act 2) Predictably, the ways of the nunnery prove to strongly disagree with Eileen’s attitude. (Act 3) She escapes and hides out at a friend's house, during which time they form a rock band and start gigging at local venues. The band works hard and eventually finds stardom and wealth.

Revised synopsis: (Act 1) Eileen is a fifteen year old girl. She lives with her father – her parents separated 6 years ago. She has a penchant for Guns n Roses and gets into trouble all the time at school. One day she goes too far and gets expelled, so her father decides that she needs morals and values drummed into her. So he sends her to a nunnery in the hope of changing her attitude. (Act 2) Predictably, the ways of the nunnery prove to strongly disagree with Eileen’s attitude. (Act 3) She escapes and hides out at a homeless shelter at the other end of town. Back at the school, her father is alerted when nobody can find Eileen, and a TV broadcast goes out. Eventually she returns home and reluctantly agrees with her father to try a little harder.

Following on from that, I have archived the original scores (crap, I even got the original rock opera score bound in its entirety at not inconsiderable cost... whoops) and have set out to compose new pieces to bring the work to a satisfactory conclusion. It seems to me that the path Act 3 should take ought to be something like this: Homeless Shelter -> Angry Father -> TV Broadcast -> Returning Home -> Promises -> All's Well/Finale

'Homeless Shelter' was rejigged a few weeks ago from the original 'Lying Low at Claire's' with some changes to the music and obviously the lyrics too. It should take another couple of months to finish the whole thing, time permitting of course!